My own personal Narrative Writing

I saw him looking at me from behind the garden shed.Thinking that this was a game so I turned right around and looked wondering where could've he gone.I ran inside feeling nervous and scared thinking what could is possibly be.I was thinking on the positive side and then ended up on the negative side.My heart felt like it was jumping .I was scared.I quickly ran to find my mum.I came across her room I paused and walked slowly and saw.....NOTHING .....  could feel something or someones breath on my leg I then ran towards the stairs thinking who's up there I could  hear noises as if they were fighting or someone was looking for something.I crept around the house looking for my car keys and my phone I rang my dad and no one answers .So I decided to hop in the car and drive and just as I was about to turn the corner I heard my phone buzzzzzzz and I checked it my phone was been rung by a person named unknown.I felt really terrified but I said to myself"be brave go back and see"And so I did I headed towards the black ans white house which was my house which was mine and I left the engine of the car on and walked into the house feeling like a spy so I crawled I rolled I hid and I was officially a spy I wondered and out loud"what do you want"My voice crackled as i said that.

I heard someone walking down the stairs .Someone was laughing and I thought I new who It was so I had a little smile on my face and said happily"DAD!"I was scared you know I could've called the cops but I was brave and came back "and he replied back"sorry your mum said to because you pranked her tooso yeah shame "stop"I promise I wont do that ever again they both agreed both to each other hugging each other for a few minuets.